GHOUL STUFF — A Halloweensie Story

I’m posting next Monday’s post early, because today’s the first day of Susanna Hill’s wonderful Halloweensie Writing Contest and I couldn’t wait to join in the fun!

The rules, in brief, are (quoting from Susanna’s blog): Write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in the 100 words), using the words candy corn, monster, and shadow. (Candy corn will be counted as 1 word.)  Your story can be scary, funny, or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people! You may use the words in any form – e.g. monsters, monstrous, shadowy, shadowed, whathaveyou.

At the end of this post, I’ll give you the link to Susanna’s post where you can find all the stories (keep checking that link — stories can be posted until 11:59 p.m. EDT on October 31st. If you want to participate, there’s time!

Now, my story. 97 words, since Susanna says “candy corn” can be counted as one. I counted my hyphenated words as 3.

GHOUL STUFF

Halloween! Scare-and-screaming time!

My brother howled. “Monsters don’t DO Halloween! Monsters hide under beds. Monsters lurk in closets. Halloween is GHOUL STUFF!”

I didn’t care. This pink monster was going Halloweening.

Nobody was scared. Nobody screamed. Ghouls everywhere! No monsters. A ghoul shrieked. I shivered.

Oh no! A baby ghoul crying! Big ghouls taunted, “You couldn’t scare a kitten!”

I ran to her. “We’re scary! Just watch!”

We tiptoed to a house. Something leapt from the shadows. We screamed!

The something smiled. “How sweet you look! Have some candy corn.”

YUM! Candy corn’s ghoul AND monster stuff!

 

G is for Ghouls (and Ghosts and Goblins). It’s for Halloween Goodies (like candy corn, although I’d rather have little chocolate bars). It’s also for Get over to Susanna’s blog to read all the entries! Here’s the link!

19 Comments

  1. Gregory E. Bray on October 27, 2017 at 11:23 pm

    I’d be happy getting candy corn at every house. =) Good luck!



  2. Carol A Martin on October 27, 2017 at 11:53 pm

    Dear little pink monster. I love him. Well done, Beth.



  3. Candice Conner on October 28, 2017 at 6:08 am

    I like how the pink monster stood up for the baby ghoul when it was getting picked on even though there’s a division between monsters and ghouls



  4. Kathy Halsey on October 28, 2017 at 7:23 am

    Nice job in getting an entire story and dialogue in the Halloweensie, Beth. Love me a pink monster.



  5. David McMullin on October 28, 2017 at 10:24 am

    Very enjoyable. Love your main character.



  6. Jilanne Hoffmann on October 28, 2017 at 3:08 pm

    Candy corn makes it all better…for some monsters and ghouls. Just leave some Mounds bars for me, and I’ll be happy. That’s one plucky pink monster you’ve got there. I really like her spunk! Good luck in the contest!



  7. Cathey Nickell on October 28, 2017 at 5:23 pm

    Awww, a cute pink monster is a nice surprise! Darling story, best of luck to you!



  8. Charlotte Dixon on October 29, 2017 at 11:23 am

    Go Pink Monster! Love the pluck and fun as she and baby ghoul get that candy corn 🙂 Good Luck, Beth!



  9. Pamela Courtney on October 29, 2017 at 12:01 pm

    Yes, candy corn belongs to everyone. Although, like you, I love me some chocolate stuff more. Love this idea of what’s Ghoul stuff verses Monster stuff. Even with monsters and ghouls we can find a commonality that exists. What a fun read.



  10. Vivian Kirkfield on October 29, 2017 at 6:23 pm

    Love the pink monster, Beth! Great job and I’m glad pink monster found a friend.



  11. Maria Marshall on October 29, 2017 at 7:07 pm

    Great way to stick together and get the candy corn!



  12. Bev Baird on October 29, 2017 at 8:52 pm

    Lovely story Beth! All the best.



  13. Diane Tulloch on October 31, 2017 at 2:35 am

    Pink Monsters I like!



  14. Vicki on October 31, 2017 at 9:06 am

    Locking my doors and turning out the lights tonight. Candy corn will be on the porch….too scary little Pink but glad it worked out for you.
    cute story 🙂
    best of luck



  15. Traci Bold on October 31, 2017 at 11:22 am

    Pink Monster learned the value of trick or treating! Cute story! Her big brother monster missed out.



  16. Alissa on October 31, 2017 at 7:45 pm

    Sounds like this ghoul had the right idea!



  17. Delfina Salimbene on October 31, 2017 at 11:17 pm

    Candy corn for pink monster and baby ghoul! That’s even better than being scary. 🙂



  18. Jane Heitman Healy on November 1, 2017 at 8:23 pm

    Ghoul stuff, indeed! Halloween is for pink monsters, baby ghoul, and everyone else!



  19. Susanna Leonard Hill on November 7, 2017 at 1:16 pm

    Ah, candy corn! The great equalizer! Love the ghoul stuff and the little pink monster 🙂 Thanks for an entertaining entry, Beth, and for being part of the Halloweensie fun!